Viability: Seems really good so far! Only one of the images, the first one, was loading for me unfortunately.
Presentation: For the most part, things are looking good! The game isn't centered on the screen when you run it in full screen, so adjusting that may be helpful. Also, when restarting the game, the links you've already clicked are very purple, so changing that to match would look nice.
Theme: Absolutely working great so far! The only thing I may recommend is changing the fonts for stuff like the newspaper.
Engagement: I was absolutely engaged! I am excited to see where the game goes from here.