Viability: I really like the layout of how the game is played and the choice you have through the story, how selecting more reveals more information to gather, of course there are some parts that are finished and are notes for you to have
Theme: I really like the color change to show the location of where you are! I love that
Presentation: I do love how things are set up and are presented, tho i feel that the text can be abit larger just because it is decent paragraphs, and the font feels smaller
Engagement: I was engaged but I feel that some of the paragraph of dialogue can be spaced out to make it more engaging. Similar to revealing more dialogue on the same page, you can sprinkle that more throughout, i feel that could add more value to the player and follow along better.
-KT