This is really fun, I love the concept! I thought the ending where the griffin finds you pathetic was really funny. There are some typos throughout (two on the first page) and I found ran into an issue with the game looping back to the start, where the affection of the griffin doesn't reset so if you try to continue playing in a loop it will rapidly send you back to the ending that you already got no matter what you do. But I think this is working really well. I think you should make the affection score a different color or font from the rest of the text so it can be easily distinguished.