MC is so annoying to look at. His son was kidnapped, yet he acts arrogantly instead of being desperate or worried. He should also be more considerate toward others, especially since he’s from another world and has nothing. But instead, he comes off as overly chill, arrogant, and foolish. The other characters look great, though. Lastly, the dialogue feels shallow and could really use more refinement. Demo is an emotional roller coaster for the mc. Started as happy › worried › disbelief › worried › denial of temptation › worried › temptation › worried › temptation.
Knightly Passion is better.