Tried out, this seems promising.
But I have a few suggestions:
Write something about the game in the project description. We (the players) don't know what is this game about. What type of game is it? Platformer? Shoot'em up? Text adventure? The embedded YT video still doesn't help, because it doesn't demonstrate any gameplay.
I'm a fast reader and I was really frustrated by the fact that I can't skip the long waiting times during the texts. Both during the intro and ingame. It will be cool to add a feature to skip those with a keypress/fire button.
I think the "LIST" command hack is intentional, I really liked it. Maybe you should redirect it to the RUN routine, so when somebody tries to LIST then it will start the game again 😛
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Thank you for your feedback, i loved your ideas. I have updated the add with a brief synopsis and what sort of game it is, it really did need it.
I have also taken note of your idea about skipping the text, i will certainly be adding that in, it would make the game have higher reply value.
And yes, the LIST was intentional haha ;).
Thanks for your feedback, i loved every bit of it. Thanks for playing and i hoped you liked it.