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We're a girl who is stuck in a dream! I achieved the ending where she comforts her child self and provides the care that she had always craved. In the beginning, I noticed a small mistake where "Check Environment" is grouped with the story text and not as a choice. I also felt a little confused when the different names appeared (Hale and Hull), but I imagine that might just be translation error. There are also minor grammatical errors such as "Her's",  but it didn't take away from the beauty of the narrative. If you'd like to correct those types of issues, I think it may be helpful to enter your text into a program like Grammarly, which is for correcting spelling and grammar issues. Anyways, I really enjoy how intricate and vivid the descriptions are. I think it is very sweet that the protagonist still has a child-side to her, even if she may be older now. It shows that a lot of memories can linger and grow with you.