this was really neat. i enjoyed all the images, the way you construct your characters is almost nostalgic in a sense-- maybe it's because of the references they make or the way they talk to eachother. i happened to follow characters whose names i remembered, like rosie for example was given a clear introduction separate from everyone else so i just happened to choose her whenever i was given the option to.
i think this script format is also very effective for the vibe you're trying to give-- since there are so many people and voices to keep track of, and dialogue is front and center, it was a good call. i think you should play around with the formatting if this is something you want to keep doing, like bolding the names or using custom css tags for certain characters to make that initial introduction and differentiation a little easier.