Nice game! I think it was really too short, though. The dialogues were fine, but I think you could have worked on them a bit more. Also, the choice of using “*” didn’t quite fit, in my opinion, and some words like “gay” shouldn’t be used in a game since anyone can play it and you can’t know if everyone is comfortable with that. The sounds were good, I found the dialogue sound effect very satisfying. I liked the visuals too. Overall, the game was fun! I hope you’ll make it longer someday. Good job! ^^
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Thank you q(≧▽≦q) yea its too short ＞﹏＜ we tried our best to create it but despite that we didn't expected it to take the whole week off the jam. None of us were writers so as for the "*" its just something that we have made up and see in some novels I have read back then, do you have resource where we can study how to be a better writer? As for the "Gay" part, I'm sorry about that we didn't intend to have that kind of effect to other people and we should definitely put a warning at the very beginning of a game next time that it might contain some offensive material to warn them, are there an advice you can give so we can be better in the future? Regarding the sound we keep getting a lot of praise in it, but its not something we created its created by people that have uploaded it in freesound.org under CC0 with some exceptions of CCBY, we do not deserve the praise for the sound and give a proper credits to the original creator. The visuals itself were done by me (❁´◡`❁) Thank you Alexya, you made my day. I hope you have a good one as well and thank you for playing our game~