This was my absolute favorite game in the jam, and I truly hope it does really well. First off, sadly, I only got to about Wednesday before I stopped playing the first time, but I fully intend to go back and play the rest. I love how every character has their own personality, and I really love seeing them change with every day. The writing and portraits are both insanely creepy, and the fact that it's hidden (somewhat) underneath a cute and simple veneer makes it even more horrific the more you play the game.
I like how the mechanics are simple, but the amount of options are large enough that one really needs to pay attention. I'm really glad you added a cheese list; I know my way around cheeses but I've never heard of casu marzu before, and I've only seen Fontina once. Having that made things a lot easier. I was a little put-off by some of the sauces (mainly because everyone kept ordering smelly sauce) but I got why you did it. Sauces make and break a pizza!
I loved how the story is introduced in tidbits. That's why I'm going to finish it up when I get some more time to. The only complaint I have is how long the game is. This is absolutely ironic since I also make long games. I don't have any problem with the repetitive nature of it and I don't have anything negative to say anywhere, I mostly just want it to be judged well. Maybe you could randomize when customers visit to keep us on our toes?
In any case, you did an amazing job with it, and I truly enjoyed this game. I purposely saved it for last because I knew I'd love it. Keep up the good work.