Andrey
Fun 5/10
Functionality 9/10
Creativity 7/10
Theme 6/10
A worthy attempt, though falling somewhat short of the spirit of the game jam. The game is rather depressing, with not much in terms of interactions and mechanics. Though one could say the focus is the narrative. So ok, but Fun is a factor we are grading. Functionally, it is pretty good, though there are some places where there are no collisions when there should be. Some places where the exits and entrances aren't entirely clear. Creativity, the story and the environments definitely have hints of thought and creativity. But as far as the depth and the design goes - there was definitely room to go further. Thematic wise, it focuses a little too much on depression and ending ones life, than it does on the topic of Empathy. Particularly sad (probably intended), is the lack of hope and solutions for the character - which as humans and children of God, we should encourage hope and overcoming our struggles. Food for thought. Anyway, good start. I would like to see you go further with the upcoming jams.