Hello! I just did a recent play through of this module and I loved it! You can read the story of my playthrough here: https://www.tumblr.com/solobeegames/797444154983579648/the-adventures-of-the-mot...
I would be happy to help with some feedback and suggestions! I agree that it could be fleshed out and expanded, but it is still a very solid and compelling module! I love the whole concept of the ancient xeno-civilization! I believe, though, I may have misunderstood how the Fragments themselves are connected on the vessel, so I think some clarity on the construction of the ship and maybe a more detailed map would be good! I also would suggest to either focus on the worldbuilding/story aspect or the facility crawl/collecting items/loot aspect because for me the highly dangerous scenarios made me focus on the story rather than exploring or finding the items in each of the Fragments. Instead I used the different items as prompts for the story I was telling. It worked out great for me, but I think it would be great to zero in on the purpose of the module.
I'm a solo player, by the way, which is why I was interested in your module because it adapted easily to my solo play! Thank you so much! 😊