God damn that was incredible. I came into this VN not expecting too much considering it is your first, but damn it blew me away. I really enjoyed how the story was told from the Zion's more innocent point of view contrasting the events of Andre's life. This VN really hit home for me and paralleled much of my life and I will admit it made me cry at times. This was a beautifully written story and I am excited to see what you create next! I also have to say the art direction was gorgeous and THE HAIR OUGH THE HAIR all the styles and everything about the hair. Fabulous job!