this.. game, has such immense power, such such immense power, the power to invoke such immeasurable feeling in the heart of the reader, the strength to rip the reader's heart out, launch it to heaven and fling it to hell, just for it to be licked by it's flames. creator, remember that this beautiful level of writing has so much potential, and know that we, the internet are here to read. thank you for such, such beautiful work.
oh, and please forgive me for my bad english, its my third language, also my immaturity, i'm still fifteen. please keep writing, i'd love to read more of your stories and watch them grow with myself.