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This was a really good chapter. I was feeling the hype for it and it was still above and beyond what I had expected. The emotional turmoil between Tellus and the protagonist had me invested and really feeling it. The action scenes were vivid and exciting. 10/10 read so far; glad I found your work and can't wait for the next chapter :)

Thank you so much! Action scenes always feel like a slog for me to write so I’m glad you enjoyed them!