The time I spent in the game is around 10 minutes. If the game is developed - with improvements to the story, scenario, better graphics, etc. - the game could reach better places. If budget is not a constraint, the game could also be made more difficult. We could obtain money by robbing people, resorting to a bit of violence, or we could introduce a job mechanic to the game and earn the money legitimately. One of the things I would like to add is that the bank robbery and house robbery sections could be more creative. For example, a time limit could be given, and if we couldn't complete the robbery within that time, the police would arrive and chase us, and we would either fight them or escape. These are my suggestions. Other than that, if focus is placed on it, good things could come out. It's a sweet game for a start :) Have fun and good luck with your work.