I am a big fan of how this is formatted with the center aligned text. I also like the colored text for each person, but the light red is kind of hard to distinguish from the white. It felt like I didn't have a ton of control over where the story went, but I am impressed by how much content there is in this story and how interesting of a concept you pulled off. The shifting setting is a very cool idea and the loop back to the start tied into the time travel mechanic really smoothly.