What could improve: The only glitch I found was that I couldn't get to the good ending even if the game held my hand while taking me to it, it kept looping back to a worse one.
What is great about this game: It's impressive that a single person did...everything. The heartfelt, raw story—with great voice acting and range—has its conclusion obvious to the player (but not the main character) from the start: that's a big difference with most experiences in the jam. What draws you in isn't finding out where the character is headed, but rather how and, more importantly, why will we get to that point. The choices are subtle, compared to most VNs. Yet, with every decision, there's a feeling that something more important is happening in the background.