Hiiii, I just played your game! And it's pretty interesting so far! The lore is creepy, alongside those balloons! I felt for poor Mallory, bless her heart. ;w;
One thing that might make the game harder, is if you made the timer count down faster maybe. But other than that, The timed choices made me afraid I wouldn't pick the right option in time sdkvbjskvksvj
This game and story has great potential, and I wish you the best of luck should you make the sequel! :>
Sincerely,
Your Neighborhood Sparkles