I enjoyed how the story unfolded, and how the PC's circumstances evolved, as I progressed towards the last third or so of the game. And I didn't run into any serious errors or soft locks. I did find the writing difficult to follow at times: because of the way the dialogue is written (using line breaks with dashes instead of the conventional closed quotes with dialogue tags), it was often ambiguous which character was speaking. Additionally, I would have appreciated more description and context for each of the NPCs from the start so that I could understand their roles within the setting and their relationship to the PC. Overall, a fun concept with potential for further development.