You're welcome!
About girls (I mean those who are still alive) I just felt like some of them had like those stereotypical female designs like 1st and last on the 4th ond on the bottom. I really like the design of the Keeper though. Pony girl is gust weird by persona. And as for the villager, yeah, their gender is hard to identify. Secretary looks fine to me. Well those might be just your style and hyperbolisation of features for emotional effect. Idk, that's how I feel. Because the best looking I believe is the MC, his parter and the Keeper. But it might be just me.
I really like your style overall and I get inspiration from it