Alright, this game was interesting! I really enjoyed the idea a lot and the concept, however there are a few things that could make this game improve a little bit and that I would like to see in the future:
First is the dialogue. I would prefer if you separated the dialogue into smaller texts rather than throwing all the text in. It can be a little bit too much to read at once and it would be a lot easier to digest. You could also make different dialogues depending on the characters, it would add more personality to them and make the game even more interesting.
Another thing is the fact that you move the camera even if you're chosing an option for dialogue. That can be annoying sometimes.
I love the idea of mixing 2D sprites in a 3D world (I actually did that in my game as well!) but I feel like in this case the sprites were quite off relative to the environment. The textures and models as well as the environment itself was too realistic for the sprites and that was a little weird for me. If you want to place sprites in a 3D world I think it's better to keep the textures and environment more low res/lowpoly as well to fit in better.
Anyways, overall I think you have a solid concept and a good foundation for an amazing game here! Again, I really enjoyed the idea and the creativity which fits perfectly with the theme of the jam as well! Don't let the above critics demotivate you as they are merely tools for improving your work. Congratulation to you for finishing the game and submiting it! Good job!
I would also appreciate if you could rate my game and give feedback!