While I do understand Renpy, and I've played with it in the past, there's certain spacings I've seen work, for me, specifically, typically I get the "Ugh I don't want to read this" when there's about ten clicks in a row, each containing much text, with not much in-between the l lengths of text. By not much, I mean mostly dialogue, usually what works best for me is having engagement with the slightly longer texts, simply due to wanting to touch the game rather than read from it, sorta the need of putting more of my attention into things, rather than getting bored. This is what I've seen in some other games, but, I do admit, it's not for every game, and, it's rather hard to change large mostly finished projects. I couldn't imagine going through and picking the whole game, as that's a lot of manual sorting.
I do agree, the "art" styling was about half of what threw me off, the other half simply was the format, as I said, formatting the feels is pretty crucial to my first impression as someone who's been around Renpy a while, and the general art form of clicking dialogue. My simple advice is the flow of things, when I walk into a room, imagining I'm water, what's the easiest thing to flow to? That's how I model items for personal use, it's how I decorate rooms, and, it's how I make whatever terrible project I try my hand at, and then ultimately abandon on the shelf.
Anyanyways, I apologize if I came off strong, I rather am passionate about games, and dialogue flow, so, I tend to be rather blunt and open on it. I also don't read everything entirely, so, for my comment, that's my perspective, the way the water flowed easiest, was I to read everything, or, was I to skip a few text blocks? I don't always do the easiest option, but, it's usually the easiest I choose when I start something new. I love the connection, and, I appreciate the counter input, I'm always striving to improve my English in the social sense, less so the understanding, but, how others understand, makes the world easier to talk to. I hope you have a wonderful day, again, still an open apology for the perceived rudeness, as I perceived this response you've gifted me as having the undertones that I was at least somewhat rude, so, I am sorry, and, I'll try to be better on communication methods. Best of luck to your future endeavors, and, may we cross paths again, I hope to have earned a nicer connotation on my English.