Just started trying this out. I'm enjoying the story so far though i was thrown off when i stumbled upon the devil bar too early i feel, Went from newly finding the mark with no real context to I'm a demon? Haven't noticed any grammar mistakes so that's pretty awesome
Design looks great so far, enjoying the store and work options for money and new stuff. (kinda bummed about the cupid purchase thing but i think it's reasonable since it doesn't exactly impact the story itself)
Edit: Also wanted to mention the audio work is quite enjoyable too
Great work so far