I'm really disappointed with how you're slowing down the story, dragging it on. He should have already been made to edit his GF's videos, not worth subscribing to Patreon for this update.
I don't want to tell you how to make your game, but the pacing was going really well up to the point where the GF was shown in the video and getting spanked, and now it just feels bad having to wait. I personally think the suffering of the MC is the best part and it's better to enjoy it over time rather than making it the climax at the end. Will sadly not continue the game. I love the art style though you did great with it even if it might be AI it's unique.