I had the privilege of reading this beside Haru and experience their reaction, so I can surely tell that you resonated with somebody who understands the experience you were trying to convey.
The tension was great, the artstyle is nice and unique. Its crazy how much you drew for this, this is the visualest novel I experienced in this jam so far. I especially liked that scene where dad looked down on jake, without words even being said, there was so much tension there.
I read that this is the first game that you developed and this is something to be proud of! I want to see more from you!