Really liked the setting! A story about singing and elements? Count me in! I feel like it's too soon to give a proper opinion, but the story has got potential.
It was fun to see Italian mixed with English as someone who speaks them both well. Though, some words were odd? I don't know if the author meant to use words from the Renaissance period or current Italian, but, if it's the latter, then there may be some minor mistakes.
also, tiny little probably spoiler
WHAT DO YOU MEAN I CAN FIGHT WITH A FAN?!
I LOVE IT!