I like the overall aesthtetic of the game, I think the altered background images offer a lot to the game. I think the art is outstanding and I love the styling of the characters and their portraits. Really really good job. The UI also looks very clean and is easy to navigate.
The story was a bit confusing to follow in terms of writing. I like that the writing style makes the dialogues seem like a poem, but the short sentences make following the story a bit hard.
I also missed some music or SFX.
Overall I liked the game, and I'd wish to see more about these interesting characters!