I am gonna give some criticism on the game. Please don't see it as hate, I want the game to improve, and I will be editing this post as I see things to improve
1.Small grammar correction in the first chapter as you just hop on a train.
MC: Then I get to met my new class.
Should be meet instead
2. First time encountering Claire her name shows as dark blue and is very hard to see. I would opt for a lighter colour especially with the black border around names. Or make a white border for her specifically. Same for Gabriel
3. At dinner between Claire, Clara and MC
Claire: When you moved, Clara lost her best friend.
I totally thought Clara had another friend and that friend died. But the thought of the message is understood as you think about it but maybe there is another way to phrase it
4. Needless dark screens.
They just break immersion. Every 2 lines the screen might turn to black only to reveal almost the same scene. During the first companion fight really bothers me as you are invested and then BAM black screen and you go Why? Also most of them need to be double clicked for some reason
5. Whirlpool Bath dialogues
The background is simply too light to read comfortably with the recommended 0% textbox opacity
6. The phonk music doen't loop good at all. It is 6+ seconds of cool beat and then it scrambles into mess and again and again. I also like phonk but if you put it put it in full or find another song.
Unchangeable things:
Having both names Claire and Clara that have the same both starting letters might be confusing
Eda first sex. MC (and I) are still in a reality where Clara was molested and almost raped and instead of going to help her we are out there fucking this bitch. Fucking might have the reasons for it but like come on man. Also I downloaded a mod (from DikGames site) that shows optimal choices and sex was optimal because of scene unlock. But even then the mod or the game(I don't want to takethe mod away and load it back to see if it changes) is MOCKING you if you don't want intercourse. Dev is completely cool if it was not him that wrote "MCname come on,really?"
My suuspicions about Plan B. Its Gabriel. He was missing a lot and hasn't had use for 2 chapters. I would like for him to have an actual job with the Companions assiciation if there is such a thing but I fear we are just gonna have an Ahaaa moment and see him as Plan B. Also I did just start chapter 3 and he talked Nael out of killing him so...