OH MY GOD DUDE! That's so freaking awesome! Where do I start...?
The instrumentation. Flawless! The theremin/synth at the start, the hiphop "cool" drums, "funky guitar", and of course the vocals! You probably used some kind of vocaloid software for it, curious to hear which one. Not only are some vocals refreshing (and I would guess would increase your rating overall, especially if done well using vocaloids etc.), but it fits the guy so well since he looks like a rapper / dancer.
The stairs. I noticed immediately when you switched: you switch rhythm and go for a classical "Take Five" 3+3+2+2 rhythm. And I love these little intermezzo's like the one at 1:25. You lose track of the rhythm and just get lost in the blasts. And the whole step upwards (I think at least that is what it is - I can't hear intervals well) makes it immediately clear that we are at the start of a measure again. So nice! The transition at 1:47 is so sweet too! I also really like the way you incorporate the vocals in the rhythms too. The placements of the "ain't afraid of me" for example are so interesting in a 5/4 rhythm. I want more vocals in odd times now xD
And the video man.... Did you draw and edited this all yourself? Really impressive. I would LOVE to see this in a Rhythm Heaven game, I'd play the fuck out of that.
I'm very glad I got to hear some of your songs again. It's been a long time since I last joined a jam with you. I remember you took a little break from jams to work on personal projects. I hope I'll see you again in the future, perhaps in some future jams. Have a good one, friend :)