the one thing i hate about this story is it is too good. that is not an insult. it is so damn good that i literally fell in love with Sarah and Akatsuki. i really love those two, to the point that i wish they were real. and i genuinely felt heartbroken when Akatsuki left and felt such relief when she came back.
i hate that i love this story so damn much. on a scale 1 to 10, i give this a 1000 out of 10.