Had a really fun time with the demo! The itch page is also very cute! I've played both versions of so far, and the current version has improved on the older one, like the cut-ins. The characters were fun to interact with, and I liked how events would reference each other. Also Wyatt had quite the glow up lol. Vince and Jean are still my favs, though Andrew and Chris are not far behind.
I'd say my only critiques/nitpicks would be to have an option to turn off the character portrait (if possible) and more flavor text for MC. The former is more because I found the different art styles for the MC doll and the other sprites to be clashing on the screen. For the latter, I missed that in the older demo, we could establish more things about our MC like height or year in college. Imo it helped with immersion and for conversations to feel less one-sided, but I do get it'd be more work.