Ah, a fellow pixel jiggle connoisseur I see! In all seriousness thank you so much, I felt solid about the writing but I was worried it might drag on too much in the scenes towards the end. I tried to cut stuff over and over but it always hurt the pacing too much, so it's really nice to hear good things about the end result.
No pressure at all but if there's anything that you think could be done to make the rhythm game bits friendlier to you please feel free to let me know! I was aiming for more fluff than challenge with them so I'd be happy to make some adjustments to make them more accessible, especially since I'm hoping to add more now that the jam is over. Cheers and thanks again!