Hay! So the overall look of this looks cool, so I decided to check it out. Overall, this looks like an amazing piece of work. My only complaint is that the progression does feel rushed. Just my take. Outside of that, I am really liking the "Final Fantasy" live vibes and the general concept of this project in terms of the story. The possibilities are really really cool with this. I personally would like it more if it slowed down and took more time with the characters and setting. Getting to know the characters a bit more before the relationships just leapfrog. But it isn't stopping me from enjoying the concept of your work thus far.