I spend much more time writing and writing across devices and text formats. The story is what matters the most, after all. It is now that I'm putting effort with the presentation and the flow of the game. That's what makes so satisfying to finally make a full start scene, with its music, art and text.
Looks decent! At least I don't feel that my eyes hurt seeing this in particular. I feel so proud...
The first part of this project will be a story subtitle Canvas. The main focus of it is the important period of this girl where she learns how to defend herself, and how to fight the ones who wants her to suffer.
Talking more about the base story, Edgar has an interesting skill with his coat. If he pierces trough the inside of it, he can shoot a solid quick hook made of water. Edgar uses this to manoeuvre in the air like Spiderman or in Shingeki no Kyojin. It's really cool. I don't know how to draw the water hook in the way I imagine it, so the way you imagine it, that one will be. And obviously, the way you will feel that he is flying will be mostly trough narration. These are the sprites of him flying.
Looking to share more later!