I think you made the women too evil/unlikeable, because dear god, I want to punch half of them in the face... At some point, a character becomes so unlikeable its too much... I hate them so much, to the point that I cant stand them, and want just to stop playing.
other than that, great game! love the graphics, animations and overall story.
I'm finding Cyn is growing on me--she's a flawed character, for sure, but I get the feeling that some of that comes from the environment she grew up in, and there are hints at her being a decent person, deep down.
Mia feels naive, but well-meaning. The others? Yeah, they're all fairly unlikable so far. Not sure if that's by design.