Very nice. I especially like the bookstore owner (Morgan, I think?); too many such VNs/games provide nothing but male protagonist in a world of females. Not that that's _bad_, exactly, but it is nice to have some other options. I really hope you develop him as thoroughly as you do the other NPCs.
And how well the personali...uh, anthroalities :-) are written. Colour me impressed by...actually, just about everything.
Thank you. I will be watching for updates when and as I have the time.