9/10. Sort, for now, but entirely enjoyable. It's emotionally engaging to read. You know when to throw hook after hook to keep ur reader's attention.
Humor doesn't feel forced and is actually funny. You used the "Visual aspect" of a Visual Novel better than most of the "VN" I've read (once in blue moon CGs). The main character is not giving "main character" energy at all. I found it quite amazing. It makes him more humane and more relatable. I'd love to see this vn getting more attention. Keep up the good work, and thanks for the meal. You served well.