This game is really promising & I'm looking forward to playing a more developed version :-]
I quite enjoyed the writing so far; the premise, setting, world building etc. really fun and cool stuff. I loved the characters too(both the writing and the art & designs)!
The music was quite fitting and competent; I felt like it was a little too understated in the first parts of the opening dungeon you were trying to create but I understand it's unfinished(?)
(This review was written with the idea that that the first dungeon crawling area of the game isn't done yet, let me know if there's more to the game I'm missing beyond that first dark first person area that's seemingly empty.)
Looking forward to more dudes!