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I'm very much enjoying the game so far, but I have to be straight: I despise Rachel, and I really, really hope she does not become one of the girlfriends. I want her nowhere near our happy little harem, especially considering the limit we've been given on how many girls we can invite (though I wouldn't be surprised if that limit is expanded at some point).

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So far Vic seems to be the only one willing to add Rachel and that's only for the sake of breaking her spirit. There are plenty of better options (probably more from the other founders, to help lend mc some clout)

Exactly! So many other girls have good chemistry with the MC and also get along with one or more girlfriends already. Almost anyone else in the cast would be more deserving of a spot in the harem. Rachel has repeatedly wronged both the MC and several of his favorite people, while showing virtually no remorse for her behavior. I would consider it a miracle if she's ever redeemed.

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Completely agree,rachel is an annoying bitch who gets on everyone's nerves,she doesn't desrve to be part of the harem,the constant reporting to alison when first arriving,the stunt she pulled at the maid event with the ticket book that got Hannah's ass spanked,she has no remorse and never apologies for her behaviour & she is basically an annoying,bitchy karen,like when the MC first started to explain to Catherine,where he wants everyone to get along together,rachel will make that unbearable as nobody likes her,so i really hope rachel doesn't get added and just gets moved to the side character part of the bio's pages,where she belongs

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I'm afraid she will definitely be joining the harem eventually: she's one of the very original LIs I came up with alongside Lucy and Vicky. However, she has a lot of story and character development to go before that point; she isn't gonna be rammed in your face in her current form. I do realise that some people may never come around on her, but I'm certainly gonna try my best!

Hmm... Well, you are a very capable writer, clearly. It's why I enjoy the game as much as I do. I'm glad to hear Rachel will eventually change her ways, but I do worry that even if she gets accepted into the group, her presence will be a constant reminder of the terrible things she's put us through. I'm having a hard time picturing her eventual acceptance as anything but pity, but I trust that you can give her a satisfying redemption arc. I thank you for your efforts, and I look forward to everything you have in store.

Well you're right about that I mean there's no way we can all forget how much trouble and discomfort Rachel has given the MC and the girls so if the writer has the magic to redeem Rachel let's see it happen after all she's going to be in the harem so let's try to give her a chance and not just put her aside

Whatever you're planning with Rachel I'm looking forward to it. Catherine was pretty insufferable initially but you fleshing out her story and character has made her actually likeable. I don't like Rachel right now but you definitely get the benefit of the doubt.

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Hmm... ok,you are a good story teller and trust your vision for how it goes,thats why ive played multiple times and enjoy it as much as i do,i just hope rachel's change and arc is believable,did find Catherine unbearable at first,but she is growing on me,but rachel has a long way to go and she has to show remorse and apologise for her shitty attitude towards everyone she has wronged,but it's Lucy she has to convince the most as Lucy is adamant about not wanting rachel anywhere near them

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id rather see elizabeth akari the goth girl in brians group that never say anything the klutz annabelle he has to save from herself. all before rachel even if she changes she is just kinda bland maybe a boobjob can help. i really want to see the drama in the founders event. and a surprise sister among the russels to torture brian  

In most other harem AVNs it's usually not a problem since you can just reject any LI that you don't like, but in a kinetic novel you end up being forced to romance girls you don't want to, often at the expense of decreased focus on the ones you DO like.