This is a weird one for me. The prologue is very well written, so it was jarring when I got to chapter one and found so many rather obvious mistakes all over the place. Nothing too so egregious as to keep me from reading but still a bit surprising given how well put together the prologue is. I'm unsure if there just hasn't been an editing pass yet, or if the prologue is older so its had more time for community editing, but either way I do love the story and hope the few parts of CH1 we have so far get the second pass they need.