Hi!! Thank you so much for playing our game and leaving a review! We are very happy to hear that you enjoyed it so much and you found the premise interesting <3
And thank you for your feedback! We had actually been discussing changes for the complete Act. 00 after upload because we did realize that. To be honest, I only did a single pass on the script for Act.00 when I first wrote it because I focused more in the script that followed and then I let it slide until there was no time to make a second pass before implementation haha... So yes! I agree that it needed a better pull at the beginning and for the first battle to start earlier. We just released a new, complete version of Act. 00, so we'd be super happy if you could check it too!
Thank you so so much again for your kind comments! We definitely want to keep working on this and plan to eventually release the VN as a full game <3