To add on to the inspection points thing, I was unaware there were inspection points in the library so I was missing out on hints and stuff
Another thing I would like to add are the items which feel meaningless, like there's no reason to pick them up or give them, obviously games a wip so there's useless stuff which is fine just that giving and picking up items takes energy
Also the writing is something you just get better at with time and feedback so it's good your so accepting to feedback and the like