Solid - there has clearly been a lot of time put into this one. I really enjoyed everything that I got to play but admit that I likely didn't get as far as I should have.
The spear felt good to use. It was intuitive to both fight and platform with.
I like having a central element like the spear to tie together all of the mechanics. It was nice how quickly the game got started, and the starting puzzles/platforming was all well sign posted and easy to get in to.
I found the text effects a little distracting, and whilst I think movement on the core ideas in a string of text, or highlighting certain words is great - I think having all of the characters enter and behave as they do is a little off putting.
Good work!
Our team has a submission too, if you get a chance we would love to see you over there!
https://itch.io/jam/feedback-quest-8-indiegames-x-indie-streamers/rate/3773442