Your take on the theme was super clever - I really admire that!
I would love to have heard a bit more range of intensity, especially in tracks like 'The Ambush' and 'The Fight'. You could easily achieve this by adding more low end to your tracks, making certain things hit (and more importantly) feel harder and more intense.
My favourite track of the bunch was definitely 'The Fire Slowly Dying'. It progressed so beautifully, and had a great amount of variety. Loved the somber tone of it!
I also really appreciate you uploading your entire soundtrack in one video! It made it a bit easier to rate and it was super cool to see how you were able to seamlessly connect them. Really helped with the story telling element of the submission as well!