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Hey! I played your game and really enjoyed it overall, but I do have some feedback. First, this could just be me being impatient lol, but I’d suggest reducing the time it takes to fill the gas in cars with half fuel a little bit.

In terms of the story, the twist—although predictable—is effective in creating an atmosphere of tension, especially since you don’t know the stranger’s intentions. That, at least for me, is where the horror of this game peaks. I did, however, find the ending a little disappointing, as the final jumpscare felt more silly than scary to me. I think prolonging the section where the stranger comes out of the bathroom (maybe by making the player check the garage after hearing a noise there) would be more effective than an almost immediate jumpscare when you go to check the open door.

As a side note, you can walk in front of cars and even the stranger himself when they’re moving forward, which results in you getting pushed, which I found to be pretty funny. To avoid this, I think implementing a mechanic where the stranger or cars stop when you get in front of them might fix the issue.

With all that being said, I still enjoyed the game, and I think you can definitely create something truly special!

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Thank you for playing and such awesome feedback! I did see your reddit post but I also notcied you sent it here as well. The tension and scare factor are something I look to increase in future projects. As far as the time to pump, is something I will continute to monitor if that keeps coming up in other comments. I like your idea about being in the way of cars, most people like to jump in front of them haha.