thank you for the feedback, slaw 1!! in my case of composing i just bash any type of melodies i can think then after all of that i remove whats not good sounding, and sometimes i just love the craziness it had (but i know it's bad cause its gonna earrape me and the listners) so what i did was to sleep and listen to it tomorrow, to reset my brain then listen to whats ugly sounding. anyways thanks for this and i will do my best to have every instruments their own spotlights !! thank you again and i'm glad you enjoyed it.