I like the instrumentation you used, it defines the setting quite well (is that a hurdy gurdy on The Storyteller?). The tracks are well composed and do a good job conveying the story. The mix is nice and clean. The first two tracks and the Silk Road tracks are probably my favs overall.
I do feel like it could benefit from a little more elaboration in some places. The daytime bazaar music, in particular, feels a little bit static - some kind of melodic content that contrasts with the main rhythmic figure might add to the vibe of a bustling town center. The flute(?) melody that comes in near the end of the nighttime version sort of fills that role. The Resolution has a nice buildup to it, but as the finale, I feel like it wants a little more time to grow.
Great work overall! Really solid submission.