Thanks, I'll try to be better with the buildup - I know that I'm rushing things a bit to get to the good parts early ("don't bore us, get to the chorus") and I need to keep an eye on that tendency.
And length-wise I could have done with more time - usually, a track takes me at least a week, so the extraordinary circumstances of a jam cut all of the extra development time short.
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Oh yeah, for what you've done in a week I could hardly actually complain haha. Within those constraints you've definitely done a fantastic job! I stand by my points but I would also advise to definitely not take them too seriously; they are far from being a genuine issue within the scope of the jam.