I had a very fun time playing this game ^^
I think I’ll start with, I really like the way the game page looks, it looks cute and it’s nice to only have the button on display, I think it’s the 1st time I see a game page like this, good description, plenty of screenshots and it feels very complete!
About the game, it reminds me of old flash games for some reason, probably this would be a game I would play for some time/days back then. The gameplay is creative, that if you only eat a lot 1 side the cookie, it crumbles so you are forced to actually eat different parts which is good, the game is forgiving because it’s enough with just touching the finishing line which I really appreciate it, also this point can lead to funny bite biscuits finish the level haha
The bite indicator is great but I don’t know if it’s a bug that in level 4/9 (in hard mode), the indicator disappears, I like that because it feels that you actually have to master the game and it felt brutal but in a way that is fun challenge, I thought it would be like that from that point but next level the indicator came back, so it would be nice to put this as an extra mode maybe, could be fun
The percentage of biscuit eaten it’s a nice touch that implements the theme of the jam well but it can be a little misleading when you eat the exact amount required. In level 1/5 you can pass the level with just 1 max bite because it lands you 20% of the biscuit but sometimes when I finished the level, it said I ate 21% or that I didn’t eat enough despite it was 20%, so in hard mode I was a bit afraid of landing the exact amount because it could say I didn’t eat enough.
I like that the game has an extra mode. The 1st 5 levels are fun, the first 2 can be passed with just a max bite and I like it this way because you are “learning” how to play, meanwhile the hard mode can be very fun with the minimum required per biscuit and makes me actually put attention, my max progress was at 7/9, I ran out of time and I left a side that very horizontal so it didn’t even make it out of the start line hahaha, it’s a bit sad that there is no save in web, but since the 1st 5 levels are easy, I think it can be ok
I like the art, it’s cute, I like both fairies, the lore is simple but I like it, but also the people in town are very forgiving, imagine getting your biscuit eaten, almost of it gone, the idea makes me laugh
The music fits the game, I just feel when you win the game, or at least the time I won, the victory theme repeated like 3-4 times when I feel it should be only once
I really had fun playing this, I don’t know if I’ll come back to actually finish, I’ll try but I don’t think I can give more feedback to the game.
Hmm, maybe when the time is about to run out, make it more visible so it's easier to know that, the menu is great, I like the "how to play" image but maybe add that you can collapse the cookie, I like the variety of biscuits and would be nice to see them in just 1 screen, just to see them all, maybe unlock them if you beat the level, idk, I'm just throwing ideas hahaha
This just feels like a great game :)
(Well, I feel my comments are more my experience/impressions than actual feedback haha, nice to see you keep doing games, last time I played one of your games was the shadow 3d game for the PS jam last year haha, keep going ^^)
