This was pretty good. I can't wait for the final product. I will admit the closer you get to the end of the story content it gets a bit slow. Especially if you rush story content without leveling stats. Then you are stuck power leveling stats with little benefit. For those reading this pre game don't rush the story. Take time to develop the girl's stats before you go rushing their stories. Also pay attention to how and why traits are gained. You never know what crazy stuff might happen....
At first I thought Ashley was just a crazy bitch, but her story ended up being one of my favorites. I feel for her. She had a rough life. It's no wonder why she is the way she is, and why she gets so attached to the main character.
I can't wait till the clones and Autumn's stories are finished, and you can buy the rest of the elves.